There’s no real problem, just thought it was catchy is all.  The editor submitted some new blurbs for me to review, let me know what you think!

1) Cindy had planned a surprise party for her husband, but the joyous gathering spiraled into a never-ending nightmare as Cindy was infused with incredible superpowers. Now she finds herself struggling to gain control over her own actions as a deadly political conspiracy rumbles in the background and her marriage threatens to collapse. Can Cindy regain control of her life in time to save the city?

2) It’s been a rough week for Cindy Ames. She’s been stabbed, the police don’t have any leads, her husband’s research firm is on the verge of catastrophe, and she’s gained incredible superpowers but isn’t sure she can resist the temptation to abuse them. Now she finds herself struggling to gain control over her own actions as a deadly political conspiracy rumbles in the background and her marriage threatens to collapse. Can Cindy reclaim her life in time to save the city? And what does a terrorist want with her husband?

It feels like we’re making progress, but I’m not convinced we’re there just yet.