Blurbs, why do you vex me so?

All right folks some new blurbs for ya. It feels like I’m getting closer to -the- blurb but we’ll see:

1.) Cindy Ames, a loving wife turned accidental superheroine, must overcome the trauma of a destroyed marriage, a thirst for vengeance, and an affair to stop a violent political conspiracy from destroying the nation. Can she save herself in time to rescue her kidnapped family, or will she be des

troyed by the realization that her search for revenge has ruined the people that loved her and made her the villain?

2.) Cindy Ames, a loving wife turned accidental superheroine, must overcome the trauma of a destroyed marriage, a thirst for vengeance, and an affair to stop a violent political conspiracy from destroying the nation. Can she save herself in time to rescue her kidnapped family, or will she become the monster consumed by poisonous revenge upon those who hurt her?

3.) Cindy Ames was an accomplished gymnast and loving wife. Now, after events beyond her control grant her unimaginable powers and abilities, she struggles to remain in the light as a force for good, while coming to grips with the fear that she is actually an instrument of evil.

Cindy must overcome the trauma of a disintegrating marriage, a mounting thirst for vengeance, and a forbidden affair, to become the heroine she needs to be to thwart a violent political conspiracy that threatens to destroy the nation. Can she master her inner demons in time to rescue her kidnapped family, or will she become a monster, poisoned by revenge, and a danger to those she loves most?

As always your feedback is greatly appreciated and taken into consideration! Blurb writing is really more the realm of marketing, hiring a freelance blurb writer is starting to sound more appetizing.

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Wilmar Luna

Couldn't be a superhero in real life so he decided to write his own. When he's not creating empowered female characters he can be found watching films, reading books, and playing lots of video games. Buy his books here: https://www.thesilverninja.com/purchase/